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راشد الهنداسي 13-01-2013 12:39 PM

The Heart of Darkness.........rashid alhindasi
 
"The Heart of Darkness"
Rashidalhindasi

From the stage, from this age
From the revenge of a secret rage
From everyone's call
Love dowels in the tiny soul
Moping inside
Feeling to glide
From side to side
I feel stagnant but permanent
Mostly, it is just a sorrow
So slim and soft like a saber
On the neck, on the cheek
While nobody has to speak
It's freak. I'm a freak!
But hash, it's hide and seek
This life is aimless, tasteless and soundless
People are careless and reckless
Feeling so fearless and heartless
Of being empty
Thy heart is dark and dirty
Can shriek shrink communities
To one with no more sadness
And burn the heart of darkness?

مروه الجعفري 13-01-2013 01:03 PM

My Brother: Rashid Al Hndasi
Beautiful words, and characters from the gold
Force you to read them twice and three and four
I liked the poem .. And we awaiting more of your creativity
...Accept my greetings...

راشد الهنداسي 13-01-2013 05:13 PM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة مروه (المشاركة 172001)
My Brother: Rashid Al Hndasi
Beautiful words, and characters from the gold
Force you to read them twice and three and four
I liked the poem .. And we awaiting more of your creativity
...Accept my greetings...



thank you so much
i really appreciate what you wrote for me

محمد الراسبي 17-01-2013 01:05 PM

Thanks Mr Rashid

سعيد محمد البلوشي 17-01-2013 02:11 PM

Rashid..

Thank you brother for being so creative

Your words seem to touch our feelings and make us fly away to the world of yours where life and love carry different meanings

White roses for such beauty

May God bless you

إدريس الراشدي 17-01-2013 04:03 PM

اقتباس:

This life is aimless, tasteless and soundless
People are careless and reckless
Feeling so fearless and heartless
Of being empty
I strongly agree with you here in some cases when the people just live hopeless .. !

Mr. Rashid, your words are really impressive
very nice and interesting poem
i like it

kind regards
Idrees

سالم الوشاحي 17-01-2013 04:39 PM

Dear brother Rashid Hindasi

Peace be upon you and God's mercy and blessings

Beginning greet you on this Algosdh

Jtna these feelings crystal clear

Wait Official Permanent poems poets

Greetings with a multitude of thanks and appreciation

بو ميحد 17-01-2013 05:04 PM

جود مستر راشد هنداسي صه الله لسانك ثانك يو فري ماتش سي يو اجين نهن لك من متابئين ;)

عامرالناعبي 18-01-2013 05:46 PM

Dear brother Rashid Hindasi

The fact that the poem is not Arabic
It was suggested that the place in the prose section and Discussion
Where this poem does not have the weight and it is not popular
Because popular poem have a weight
thank you brother

راشد الهنداسي 20-01-2013 11:45 AM

اقتباس:

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة محمد الراسبي (المشاركة 172486)
thanks mr rashid

thank you sooooo much
an honor for me sir


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